August 20th, 2012



Hi, I apologize if this is done improperly, but I'm not quite sure what the proper procedure is like anyway. Basically I would like to find a beta. English is my first language and other than the tendency to use strange words (because I like the way they sound) and to be rather long-winded (because I am an old lady at heart), I'm alright. 

Pointing out illogical plot holes, inconsistent characterization, and firmly telling me to stop gibbering and just get on with it will be much appreciated. 

Thank you.